The Train Ride

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Authors Note:

This story was written as a challenge to tell an erotic tale with the fewest words possible. I had it down to 618, but the minimum length for some sites is 750 words. I added some dialogue, a few adjectives and expanded some descriptions so I could post it on all the sites I use.


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As I got on the train, my eyes met hers. There was an instant connection, and I knew that we would soon be naked and sweaty together. I could tell by the way her breathing changed, she knew it too.

A couple of hours later, I entered the dining car and saw her sitting alone. I boldly walked up to her table and sat down without asking. She looked at me with a wry smile on her face, and an invitation in her eyes.

"I'm Tom," I said offering her my hand.

"Sue," she replied, shaking my hand.

We ate in silence. No words were needed. We both knew what was going to happen. After finishing our meal, I lead her to the sleeping car. When we reached my berth, I opened the door and let her enter first.

Without hesitation, she stepped through the door, and I followed, closing the door. Once we were alone, my arms wrapped around her waist from behind. I kissed her neck, and she tilted her head exposing more of it to me.

My hands rested on her flat stomach, just below her warm soft breasts. I could feel the bottom pressing down on my arms. I cupped and squeezed one of the globes with my hand, as my other hand slipped down her skirt and started to drag it up her legs, exposing her taut thighs.

She twisted her body around, pressing tightly against me and our lips met. Her breasts were crushed against me as my hands grasped her ass, lifting her several inches off the floor.

Her long legs tightly encircled my waist, and I carried her the three steps to the bed. I sat down on the thin mattress as our tongues intertwined.

She pulled her head back, showing me the hunger in her eyes. She began to unbutton my shirt, and I leaned back to give her room to undress me.

As she kissed my chest, I unzipped her dress. Soon we were naked. My hands explored her hot flesh. Our lips left trails of little red marks showing where they'd been.

She dropped to her knees. Looking deep into my eyes she grabbed the base of my cock and lowered her mouth over it. I groaned as she deep throated my shaft.

Her mouth was better than any pussy I've ever fucked. I lay back and closed my eyes, enjoying her skill. She sucked, and licked, and slurped until I was harder than I had ever been.

Too soon, she released my cock and turned, showing me her sweet ass. She held my shaft as the warm velvety-smooth pussy encased my dick.

She rode me hard, like a Pony Express rider being chased by bandits. Our bodies were slapping together loudly. I grasped her hips to try and slow her pace because I wasn't ready for this to end.

She slowed down, a little, and I mentally recited the 11 General Orders of a Sentry, to try and postpone the inevitable. She pulled away from my rigid shaft and got on all fours. "I want you to come in my ass," she said salaciously, as she wiggled it at me. My cock was drenched from her fluids; I didn't need more lube. I knelt behind her and spread her open.

I looked at the cute little hole, and not wanting to hurt her, I worked up a large wad of spit which I used to coat her asshole. My finger made sure she was coated inside and out, then I pushed my cock in.

She rocked back, taking my entire shaft into her bowels. "Now fuck me like a man," she demanded.

Never one to deny a lady's request, I grabbed her hips and drove my cock fully inside her. She screamed, "OH YES! Pound my ass."

After that, we just moaned and groaned as my cock pistoned in and out of her bunghole. I let one of my hands slip around her waist, finding her wet pussy. I rubbed her cunt, trying to make her cum because I couldn't last much longer.

Our bodies slapped together in animal lust, both of us reaching the pinnacle of pleasure. As my cum blasted into her, her arms collapsed, as she shuddered in climax.

When we recovered, I took her in my arms and kissed the back of her neck. "Baby, you're the greatest," I told her.

"You're not so bad yourself," she replied, kissing me on the cheek before walking out of my life forever.

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This ends the story of Tom and Sue.

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