Feedback on Current Stories

If anyone has read any of my stories, I would be interested to hear what you think about them. Specifically, in terms of being on this site and the types of stories that this site is looking to post, how do my stories fit? What do you like that makes you want to read them, and what could be better?

I love work shopping so I have no problem with constructive criticism, so don't be afraid. Thank you! :)

(Posted Feb 18, 2016)